Fresh Shores Coconut Oil How Would You Clean This Poem Up?

How would you clean this poem up? - fresh shores coconut oil

Ever beaten
a bamboo pipe
the beautiful island of Hawaii?

made the cut green cane
with his knee, Youth
stir in the warm sea breeze?

Although mistakes were not his fault
No salt fresh water
mixed with the tears that stood in his eyes?

Today, the tide has changed
Considerations, new
The waves breaking on the distant shores